MidnightXTears
Lemur
Lost in a bloody sea, my eyes of a stormy sea search for yours.
Posts: 7
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Post by MidnightXTears on Feb 18, 2008 14:50:18 GMT -6
Yeah... I'll post my poetry here. If anyone wants to critique they have my complete attention, and... yeah.
Rawr.
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MidnightXTears
Lemur
Lost in a bloody sea, my eyes of a stormy sea search for yours.
Posts: 7
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Post by MidnightXTears on Feb 18, 2008 14:51:04 GMT -6
Dark Longing
Night has fallen, The beast has awakened. Clawing her way out into humanity's lonesome back alleys of outcasts. The lonesome three, My friends. Pyro's kiss, Creator's facade, and Flora's attitude. I want it all. I have it all. I wish to be loved, And don't realize my wishes are fulfilled. The Cheater, The Bully, And the Wannabe taunt me, Shattering my heart's shell of innocence. Will I ever be happy again? Where the Velvet restrains, The skin has burnt. I have been hurt, And nobody knows. I have a facade, Much like Creator's now. I do not like how I've changed. I have Pyro's kiss, But reject it in fear. I have no need for Flora's attitude, My strength has died. Have I, as well? Your Daemons forever haunt you. Your Nightmares never leave you.
And in the end, The only one haunted... Is me.
Sing me to sleep, my ghost.
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MidnightXTears
Lemur
Lost in a bloody sea, my eyes of a stormy sea search for yours.
Posts: 7
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Post by MidnightXTears on Feb 18, 2008 14:53:22 GMT -6
Haiku anyone?
Moonlight on the waves
Silvery moonlight Sparkling on the crashing waves The sea sings beauty
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MidnightXTears
Lemur
Lost in a bloody sea, my eyes of a stormy sea search for yours.
Posts: 7
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Post by MidnightXTears on Feb 18, 2008 15:00:54 GMT -6
Mirror, Mirror
Mirror, mirror, on the wall, Who’s the fairest of them all? You my dear are certainly not, If I were you, from a cliff I’d fall!
Mirror, mirror in my hand, Who’s the fairest in the land? Your sister’s cousin-twice removed! For she’s fairer than all of your band!
Mirror, mirror, tell me truth, Who shall I kill with claw and tooth? Your sister’s cousin twice removed, Is sitting in a kissing booth!
Why am I still standing here, That sister girl should be cowering with fear! I forgot to tell you, owner mine, Your sister’s cousin twice removed- She isn’t more than a horse’s rear!
I know... it's cheezy.
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MidnightXTears
Lemur
Lost in a bloody sea, my eyes of a stormy sea search for yours.
Posts: 7
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Post by MidnightXTears on Feb 18, 2008 15:02:00 GMT -6
plastic fantastic
you think I care, you think I love, you call me telling me you just had a bad breakup. you are in tears, my friends are here. I laugh at you, I make fun of you. I’m just telling you how worthless you are. I don’t care, I don’t love. I’m egotistical, I’m a barbie doll I’m pretty, but I’m hollow. I have no heart, I have no soul, I’m just a shell. I’m conceited, I’m a daemon. you cry then pretend it doesn’t hurt. I’m tearing you to peices. ‘You look fat.’ I say ‘you need makeup’ I say. ‘you are ugly’ I say ‘just kill yourself’ I say. and you did. a bullet to the head, a shot in the brain. it didn’t hurt, it didn’t hurt me. it made me laugh. ‘stupid girl,’ I say at your funeral, ‘I cannot love, I cannot love you. I’m just a pretty little barbie. inside me there is no emotion, no emotion, but an echo of a conscience growing weaker and weaker. after all, I’m just a pretty little barbie doll.’
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MidnightXTears
Lemur
Lost in a bloody sea, my eyes of a stormy sea search for yours.
Posts: 7
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Post by MidnightXTears on Feb 18, 2008 15:03:52 GMT -6
NoBoDy
I am one you know naught, and a sister of night. I am your shadow, I am your light. I never existed, and I never will. . .
I am the shadow of light, and the light in the dark. All anyone needs to know, is that though I never exist, I am still here.
What am I ?
My life’s all a lie, my story in dust. My emotions are no longer a must. My arms are bound with a fraying rope I hope with this life that I can cope. My life like water is slipping away. My supports once steady are starting to sway. . .
I am nothing.
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